So it seems that my prediction as of last update was completely wrong. Instead of ignoring that little Twitter thing, I've actually managed to keep up with that and instead forget nearly completely about this. In an effort to bring my attention back around, I'm going to try and keep myself to a bi-weekly schedule for the blog. So every two weeks, I'll be sure to come back around and update with goings on and various other topics. Which also brings me to touch upon the issue of content. Seeing as how NaNoWriMo has been over for a few months now, I'll be shifting focus on to a more general view on things. I'll still give writing advice if and when I see fit, and of course, I'll be updating with the status of my '10 novel, Shades of Change and the various stages of editing that it happens to be going through.
Other topics I may or may not post about are, in no particular order, personal news, video games, worldly happenings that I happen to have an opinion about (don't worry, there aren't really many of these), and things of the sort.
But, going back to the whole writing side of things for a moment, if you've somehow managed to keep an eye on this blog (with it's lack of updates and all) and its sidebar to the left there, you'll have known that I intended to finally begin revising Shades. Now, shamefully, I still haven't started on it; although I have taken a look back at the first few chapters and realize quite a few issues exist within the writing. The pacing for a lot of the beginning chapters is completely awful. There is basically no spacing between major events, and what little there is, is weak and fairly poorly written. Of course, being a NaNovel, I didn't expect too much more than this, and honestly, it's easily rectifiable. I've also found out that third-person limited may not actually be the best delivery method for the story itself, and indeed, it may benefit greatly from having a complete overhaul into first person perspective (see a few posts back to see some possible reasons why this is).
And, while I've found all of this out, another future project of mine that I've been planning for well over a year now has finally begun to open itself up and make itself available. I haven't really mentioned it very much on the blog here, but I've had this idea floating in my head for the longest time based upon a prompt that I came up with during a completely unrelated event. That being said, this idea refused to allow me to explore it much, and as such most of the planning I've done for it is terrible and probably won't see the light of day. However, recently I've come across a few things about this new plot that would work wonderfully if implemented correctly, and I hope to begin outlining it quite soon. Writing probably won't commence for quite a while, but the thought isn't going anywhere for a long, long time.
Which brings me to more current news. Again, if you've somehow managed to keep up with this blog, even while I haven't, you'll notice that I've also begun quite a new adventure; one more closely tied to my other great pass time, video games. I've begun a Let's Play series on one of my absolute favorite games of all time (which, incidentally, has some of the best writing in a video game that I've seen).
If you don't happen to know what a "Let's Play" is, allow me to explain. A Let's Play is a fairly new thing that has popped up out of the internet culture-pot, the SomethingAwful forums. The basic premise is one or two people take it upon themselves to record themselves playing a game, be it through screenshots or video, and provide a helpful walkthrough and/or humorous commentary. Some of the better Let's Players are able to do both with incredible skill, and they're often great time sinks.
That being said, I've started my own series on Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic II: The Sith Lords. If you're interested in watching it, you can find it on YouTube on my channel page.
Anyway, that's all I have for all of you guys today. So, with all of that in mind, I bid you all adieu until two weeks from now.
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1/30/2011
1/03/2011
Oh Wait, I Still Have a Blog.
Wow... so it's been an entire month without even so much as a peep out of this tiny little corner of that prismatic thing we call an internet. Anyway, there's been quite a few things happening around the world in my "absence", not the least of which being the holiday season and the start of a new year. It's been quite an adventurous month, as I've been ferried around through three or four states on roughly twenty different occasions, and that leaves fairly little time to do other things, as I'm sure you all know.
Anyway, as has already been stated around the world, quite many times, 2010 is over. That's right, another decade descends into the annals of history and a new one rises before us, waiting to be explored. People around the world have made resolutions for what they will be doing with their lives in this fantastic new year, and I for one, am no different. What is/are my resolutions? Well, simply put, to stop being so damned lazy.
I've been putting off quite a few things, and for quite a long time now. I aim to put a stop to all of it. First and foremost, I will be setting off with a full head of steam, editing the novel I wrote in November to a more polished, much more readable state. After that, well, it's one big mystery, but somewhere along the line, I know that I will probably set off on writing another novel and editing that. But that's another, erm... story. Secondly, I will be finding myself a stable job and saving money. This seems relatively straightforward, but with my lack of social skills, one can only hope this venture ends well. Thirdly, I am resolving to re-enroll in college. While this year off has been nice, I need to hunker down and set myself right.
After all of that, I honestly don't know. I have so many things that I want to do, and if I don't sit myself down and outline a plan, then nothing will get done, I'm sure of it. Regardless, that's the future. I'd like to also talk a bit about the past. 2010 was a year of a great many things - not the least of which being the year in which I wrote my first "full-length" novel. Just thinking back to what we're now calling last year calls forth such a dizzying amount of information and memories that I don't think I'd be able to recall it all to the extent that I would like.
One very prominent memory of last year comes to mind, and very clearly. Before I divulge that, however, I have to add in some back story first. You see, about three years ago, my family became split into about three groups, each living in separate states and all of that. My mother and father, dragging me along, moved to Connecticut. Shortly after that, my mother split from my father, me tagging along with her, and moved to New Jersey. And, remaining in Florida were my two brothers. Since then, one of my brothers has found his way up here, and is now living with us here in New Jersey.
Last year was special for me because it was the first time in two years that I'd seen all of my immediate family in one place, and for once, none of them were fighting each other. Let's just say it was a rather moving experience, and one that I dearly wish would repeat itself, even though common sense and logic are already telling me that it probably won't happen.
But that's enough about me. What about you guys? What have you been up to in this past month, and what are your resolutions for the year ahead?
Anyway, as has already been stated around the world, quite many times, 2010 is over. That's right, another decade descends into the annals of history and a new one rises before us, waiting to be explored. People around the world have made resolutions for what they will be doing with their lives in this fantastic new year, and I for one, am no different. What is/are my resolutions? Well, simply put, to stop being so damned lazy.
I've been putting off quite a few things, and for quite a long time now. I aim to put a stop to all of it. First and foremost, I will be setting off with a full head of steam, editing the novel I wrote in November to a more polished, much more readable state. After that, well, it's one big mystery, but somewhere along the line, I know that I will probably set off on writing another novel and editing that. But that's another, erm... story. Secondly, I will be finding myself a stable job and saving money. This seems relatively straightforward, but with my lack of social skills, one can only hope this venture ends well. Thirdly, I am resolving to re-enroll in college. While this year off has been nice, I need to hunker down and set myself right.
After all of that, I honestly don't know. I have so many things that I want to do, and if I don't sit myself down and outline a plan, then nothing will get done, I'm sure of it. Regardless, that's the future. I'd like to also talk a bit about the past. 2010 was a year of a great many things - not the least of which being the year in which I wrote my first "full-length" novel. Just thinking back to what we're now calling last year calls forth such a dizzying amount of information and memories that I don't think I'd be able to recall it all to the extent that I would like.
One very prominent memory of last year comes to mind, and very clearly. Before I divulge that, however, I have to add in some back story first. You see, about three years ago, my family became split into about three groups, each living in separate states and all of that. My mother and father, dragging me along, moved to Connecticut. Shortly after that, my mother split from my father, me tagging along with her, and moved to New Jersey. And, remaining in Florida were my two brothers. Since then, one of my brothers has found his way up here, and is now living with us here in New Jersey.
Last year was special for me because it was the first time in two years that I'd seen all of my immediate family in one place, and for once, none of them were fighting each other. Let's just say it was a rather moving experience, and one that I dearly wish would repeat itself, even though common sense and logic are already telling me that it probably won't happen.
But that's enough about me. What about you guys? What have you been up to in this past month, and what are your resolutions for the year ahead?
12/04/2010
Oh, December
Alright, so we are officially out of the craziness that is National Novel Writing Month and we're now out and about on our grand journey of either revision or deep coma. Personally, I'm still working at my novel bit by bit, but I feel the end is coming soon, at least. And that, my friends, is a good feeling.
Anyway, it's December. The month of ever colder weather, eggnog and/or hot chocolate, and of course the holidays. But, I don't want to delve into any of those vast topics for today's update. Instead, I wanted to say a few things on perspective. As in writing perspective, something I've been mulling over quite awhile.
I've found over the years that I write best under the third person limited perspective, and that any attempts to write anything else often end up flat and unimaginative. I also know some people who swear by first person and so on. But perspective doesn't just provide a vehicle for the reader's adventure to take place. It also has an impact that fluctuates depending on the content of the story, I've found. Let's hypothesize a moment.
Say you have a story that's full of traumatic events for your main character. Sure, you could convey that quite well using third person, and perhaps it works for you; but say you write it in first person instead. Instead of watching as the character experiences these dreadful things, you can make your reader experience them alongside your character, and by far that creates a connection between your readers and your characters, providing points of reference, as well as a bit of realism that you can inject into your story.
Why is realism important? Well, this all goes back to my how-to back in October, when I talked about the importance of plotting; realism brings credence to your story, even if it's fantasy. Suspension of disbelief is a term that's quite often used to describe fiction, be it written medium, or otherwise. Basically you're trying to make your story as believable as possible so that your readers can relate to your characters' plight and pull for them, as opposed to making them hate your characters, which often leads to the readers not liking the story as much.
But, back to perspective. Emotional/physical trauma isn't the only forte of first-person. If your story focuses mainly on one character as they grow into a role or something of the like, the perspective also shines here. I've recently been reading Mogworld by "Yahtzee" Croshaw, and it is written from the perspective from the main character as he goes on a fun little quest (albeit one that heavily parodies standard online role-playing games' procedures), but it's less the quest and more the character's quirks and views on the world that bring the story to life.
Similarly, third person shines when there's something bigger than just the character's exploits going on in the world, or when you wish to tell the story from more than one point of view (unless you're writing 3-P limited).
But whatever you like to write, keep in mind your audience and your preferred perspective's pros and cons. That being said, which perspective do you enjoy writing in?
Anyway, it's December. The month of ever colder weather, eggnog and/or hot chocolate, and of course the holidays. But, I don't want to delve into any of those vast topics for today's update. Instead, I wanted to say a few things on perspective. As in writing perspective, something I've been mulling over quite awhile.
I've found over the years that I write best under the third person limited perspective, and that any attempts to write anything else often end up flat and unimaginative. I also know some people who swear by first person and so on. But perspective doesn't just provide a vehicle for the reader's adventure to take place. It also has an impact that fluctuates depending on the content of the story, I've found. Let's hypothesize a moment.
Say you have a story that's full of traumatic events for your main character. Sure, you could convey that quite well using third person, and perhaps it works for you; but say you write it in first person instead. Instead of watching as the character experiences these dreadful things, you can make your reader experience them alongside your character, and by far that creates a connection between your readers and your characters, providing points of reference, as well as a bit of realism that you can inject into your story.
Why is realism important? Well, this all goes back to my how-to back in October, when I talked about the importance of plotting; realism brings credence to your story, even if it's fantasy. Suspension of disbelief is a term that's quite often used to describe fiction, be it written medium, or otherwise. Basically you're trying to make your story as believable as possible so that your readers can relate to your characters' plight and pull for them, as opposed to making them hate your characters, which often leads to the readers not liking the story as much.
But, back to perspective. Emotional/physical trauma isn't the only forte of first-person. If your story focuses mainly on one character as they grow into a role or something of the like, the perspective also shines here. I've recently been reading Mogworld by "Yahtzee" Croshaw, and it is written from the perspective from the main character as he goes on a fun little quest (albeit one that heavily parodies standard online role-playing games' procedures), but it's less the quest and more the character's quirks and views on the world that bring the story to life.
Similarly, third person shines when there's something bigger than just the character's exploits going on in the world, or when you wish to tell the story from more than one point of view (unless you're writing 3-P limited).
But whatever you like to write, keep in mind your audience and your preferred perspective's pros and cons. That being said, which perspective do you enjoy writing in?
11/30/2010
All Good Things...
National Novel Writing Month is almost over! It seems like just yesterday we started on the grand voyage of fifty thousand words, and now? Now it's coming to a close. Sadness abound, I think we've had a good time this month, and it's almost time to (possibly) revise our little projects until next year. Personally, I've got a lot of work to do. I still haven't finished my own story (I know, pretty terrible for having won halfway through.) and after that comes editing, editing, editing.
So before I ramble my head off, I'll let you all finish up your own novels, and I'll see you in the winner's circle. Next update should be a real update, and not any of this short stuff I've been trying to pass off as good blogging.
11/11/2010
On Why Sleeping is A Fairly Important Thing
Hey, everyone.
We're nearing the halfway point of the entire National Novel Writing Month thing and I must say that I've run into a bit of a trouble spot. It isn't with the material I'm writing, or even the Week Two disease. No, I'm suffering from the rare disorder of Really Strange Sleep Schedule.
Now, this sort of thing isn't exactly a rare occurrence with me, but I rather hoped that it wouldn't show it's ugly face during the month of November. It's not the hardest thing to overcome, but it definitely interferes with my writing time, and that is NOT a good thing. I said two days ago that sometimes a day off can get you re-focused on your novel and your writing, but I suppose those days off that I took didn't help me much.
Anyway, to keep from rambling, I've decided to finally disregard my 5k a day regimen (as if that wasn't quite apparent already), and have started striving only for the 1.6k that serves as the original daily requirement. If I happen to write more, then so be it. If not, eh, at least I have that massive buffer. I intend to keep writing until I can't write any more while in keeping with the story, so it's rather safe to say that Shades of Change will be totally complete by the end of November. Minus major edits, of course. This year's goal (as seen on my "Projects Listing" page) was 50-75k, and so long as I keep up the current pace, I'll probably end up over a hundred thousand. And again, if not, well, 75 shouldn't be a difficult number to obtain.
But to keep with the title of this update, I reiterate: sleeping is a good practice. Try not to lose TOO much over NaNo. Unless you are like me and suffer frequently from RSSS. In that case, write when you can while you're awake. My next update will most likely include another excerpt from the novel, if I can decide on what I want to share with you all.
We're nearing the halfway point of the entire National Novel Writing Month thing and I must say that I've run into a bit of a trouble spot. It isn't with the material I'm writing, or even the Week Two disease. No, I'm suffering from the rare disorder of Really Strange Sleep Schedule.
Now, this sort of thing isn't exactly a rare occurrence with me, but I rather hoped that it wouldn't show it's ugly face during the month of November. It's not the hardest thing to overcome, but it definitely interferes with my writing time, and that is NOT a good thing. I said two days ago that sometimes a day off can get you re-focused on your novel and your writing, but I suppose those days off that I took didn't help me much.
Anyway, to keep from rambling, I've decided to finally disregard my 5k a day regimen (as if that wasn't quite apparent already), and have started striving only for the 1.6k that serves as the original daily requirement. If I happen to write more, then so be it. If not, eh, at least I have that massive buffer. I intend to keep writing until I can't write any more while in keeping with the story, so it's rather safe to say that Shades of Change will be totally complete by the end of November. Minus major edits, of course. This year's goal (as seen on my "Projects Listing" page) was 50-75k, and so long as I keep up the current pace, I'll probably end up over a hundred thousand. And again, if not, well, 75 shouldn't be a difficult number to obtain.
But to keep with the title of this update, I reiterate: sleeping is a good practice. Try not to lose TOO much over NaNo. Unless you are like me and suffer frequently from RSSS. In that case, write when you can while you're awake. My next update will most likely include another excerpt from the novel, if I can decide on what I want to share with you all.
11/05/2010
On Various Things Vaguely Related to NaNo.
At the outset of this post, I left the title line rather blank. Not because I didn't know what I wanted it to be, but because I was unsure of how to phrase it. This, admittedly, happens more than I like it to. Titles are supposed to be an indication of what something contains, and as such they should be clear and concise, and all of that fun little nonsense. But no one ever tells you in schooling, what makes a good title? Is it how short it is, or how detailed it is, or is it just how cool it happens to sound while remaining in the ballpark area of what's within? Whatever it is, titles are not today's topic.
As I've stated before, I've been enjoying great success in my National Novel Writing to date, putting in an average of at least 5,000 words per day (although I am quite proud of my 6k day yesterday, that was refreshing!) and not showing the least bit of interest in slowing down. However, tonight, all that has to change due to prior obligations.
That's right, it's Dungeons and Dragons night. And I'm fully expected to be there.
So, what am I to do? Well, I've already decided that I'll be taking a pad and a pen to the game and at every chance I'm able to get, jot down a few hundred or so words, or whatever I happen to be able to fit in the time I'm given. During breaks, that's when I'll get up to about a thousand down or so. And when the night's all said and done, I get to come back home and transcribe. This also gives me the chance to edit some of the work to flow better and not sound so... disjointed.
And that brings me to the true topic of the day: editing during NaNo.
I went around to a few different writers' blogs yesterday in an attempt to slow myself down just a little, and I came across a few stating their opinions on the taboo that is editing in November's writing insanity. I'd just like to say one thing in opening: without mid-writing editing, I would be a lost soul. I rely on a few bits of editing here and there to soothe my minor bouts of OCD (no, I don't actually have the disorder, but my brain works in such a way at times.), so that my inner editor is calm enough to allow me some time alone to write whatever fancies me.
I seem to have perfected the art while I was busy writing fan fiction stories. I was never one for drafting, and often times, the very moment I finished a chapter I would publish it on the website, so that meant that I needed to have a relatively readable and at least somewhat edited piece of work ready when I did so. How did I manage this? I used the trusty old pencil-and-paper technique. I find it allows for quick and easy edits during the transcription process, because as you're typing the information in, you yourself are forced to read what you wrote and see if it just so happens to work. If it doesn't, make changes as you type. All the time you spend in writing your story longhand comes back to you in transcription, with the added bonus of more quality to show off to all of your wonderful readers.
And the good thing is, that it works both ways. Say you're pressed for time, and you'd like to keep a paragraph or two that you've typed in on your computer for context. Write it down in your notebook, making small edits to that little snippet, take that notebook with you, continue where you left off, and when you're ready to sit back down at the computer, take those paragraphs and rephrase them using the edits in your notebook. You'll thank yourself for it in December, I promise.
But, what about classic editing? You know, reading line by line in an effort to find even the smallest discrepancy? Don't do that, unless you find yourself very far ahead in your writing or if you find yourself stuck. For instance, if you're stuck, there's a good chance that going back and looking at what you've written already will clue you into some things you can write to continue on and move not only your novel, but your word count into higher territory. Just don't do it too much. That can be a bad thing and perhaps even dissuade you from writing anything at all, which is definitely not good.
So, with all of that having been said, I'm off to begin writing today's 4k so that I can keep my pace up and hopefully hit the halfway mark of NaNo's 50k today. Happy NaNoing, everyone.
P.S.: I almost just hit the 'publish' button without titling the damn post. Curse you, title fairy! Also, quick question for you guys. Do you like to title your chapters, or do you prefer to leave the chapters as mere numbers?
As I've stated before, I've been enjoying great success in my National Novel Writing to date, putting in an average of at least 5,000 words per day (although I am quite proud of my 6k day yesterday, that was refreshing!) and not showing the least bit of interest in slowing down. However, tonight, all that has to change due to prior obligations.
That's right, it's Dungeons and Dragons night. And I'm fully expected to be there.
So, what am I to do? Well, I've already decided that I'll be taking a pad and a pen to the game and at every chance I'm able to get, jot down a few hundred or so words, or whatever I happen to be able to fit in the time I'm given. During breaks, that's when I'll get up to about a thousand down or so. And when the night's all said and done, I get to come back home and transcribe. This also gives me the chance to edit some of the work to flow better and not sound so... disjointed.
And that brings me to the true topic of the day: editing during NaNo.
I went around to a few different writers' blogs yesterday in an attempt to slow myself down just a little, and I came across a few stating their opinions on the taboo that is editing in November's writing insanity. I'd just like to say one thing in opening: without mid-writing editing, I would be a lost soul. I rely on a few bits of editing here and there to soothe my minor bouts of OCD (no, I don't actually have the disorder, but my brain works in such a way at times.), so that my inner editor is calm enough to allow me some time alone to write whatever fancies me.
I seem to have perfected the art while I was busy writing fan fiction stories. I was never one for drafting, and often times, the very moment I finished a chapter I would publish it on the website, so that meant that I needed to have a relatively readable and at least somewhat edited piece of work ready when I did so. How did I manage this? I used the trusty old pencil-and-paper technique. I find it allows for quick and easy edits during the transcription process, because as you're typing the information in, you yourself are forced to read what you wrote and see if it just so happens to work. If it doesn't, make changes as you type. All the time you spend in writing your story longhand comes back to you in transcription, with the added bonus of more quality to show off to all of your wonderful readers.
And the good thing is, that it works both ways. Say you're pressed for time, and you'd like to keep a paragraph or two that you've typed in on your computer for context. Write it down in your notebook, making small edits to that little snippet, take that notebook with you, continue where you left off, and when you're ready to sit back down at the computer, take those paragraphs and rephrase them using the edits in your notebook. You'll thank yourself for it in December, I promise.
But, what about classic editing? You know, reading line by line in an effort to find even the smallest discrepancy? Don't do that, unless you find yourself very far ahead in your writing or if you find yourself stuck. For instance, if you're stuck, there's a good chance that going back and looking at what you've written already will clue you into some things you can write to continue on and move not only your novel, but your word count into higher territory. Just don't do it too much. That can be a bad thing and perhaps even dissuade you from writing anything at all, which is definitely not good.
So, with all of that having been said, I'm off to begin writing today's 4k so that I can keep my pace up and hopefully hit the halfway mark of NaNo's 50k today. Happy NaNoing, everyone.
P.S.: I almost just hit the 'publish' button without titling the damn post. Curse you, title fairy! Also, quick question for you guys. Do you like to title your chapters, or do you prefer to leave the chapters as mere numbers?
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